{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"50372264","dateCreated":"1328909811","smartDate":"Feb 10, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"brett.smith","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/brett.smith","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1318860106\/brett.smith-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/ketvidprodmodproj.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/50372264"},"dateDigested":1532128957,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Module 3's Outline","description":"I'm wrapping up a little earlier than I thought I would today so I had time to glance over the edits and notes. Off the top of my head, here are a few things:
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\nCynthia, on Write a Script: I copied and pasted some of your thoughts from a while back into the Discussion. They're under Ideas for Module 3 Text. And don't worry about taking anybody backward with anything--I'm the one that takes everybody backward.
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\nJeff, I like the Make a Storyboard section you added. My only concern is we're not going to be able to fit all the text into one module, even if it is its own module. We'll almost certainly have to have the storyboard itself as a PDF or other document and not embedded in the module. Space in the modules is pretty limited. That said I feel like sometimes I run short with the text--hopefully there's enough there, or at least enough to build upon. Sidebar: I would love to keep the shark and kid, but only barely change them in each panel, and then give a description that still fits each.
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\nLiked adding examples of classroom projects in Objective.
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\nYeah, that's it for now I think. I'll go through it more next week. I just happened to notice a lot of revisions a minute ago and wanted to add some thoughts before I forgot over the weekend. Bye.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"50372304","body":"Oh, also: are everyone's edits showing up? I'm seeing something about some additions being lost because the text was being edited at the same time. Are we all good...?","dateCreated":"1328909878","smartDate":"Feb 10, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"brett.smith","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/brett.smith","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1318860106\/brett.smith-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"50373916","body":"Right, I just went ahead and inserted an example storyboard with descriptive text to express the ideas.
\nAll can be edited, PDF'd, etc. Looking good so far. Thanks, JG","dateCreated":"1328913489","smartDate":"Feb 10, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"JGray_KET","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/JGray_KET","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1295623265\/JGray_KET-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"50186084","dateCreated":"1328638632","smartDate":"Feb 7, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"brett.smith","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/brett.smith","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1318860106\/brett.smith-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/ketvidprodmodproj.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/50186084"},"dateDigested":1532128957,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"A couple notes","description":"This is just to maybe expand on some questions or notes I left in the text...
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\n-There's all the usual KY Academic Expectations that I struggled with;
\n-What's everyone's thoughts on the Pitch Your Idea section? Cut it or leave it?;
\n-I had a few questions about the script writing section as I was looking over our outline. Right now we have a script\/storyboard comparison under Develop a Treatment. I'm not sure if there was a reason behind that to begin with, but it seemed like, reading over all of this put together, that that might make more sense under the Write a Script section. There was a similar re-arranging idea that Cynthia had a while back, and I kind of left that open in the text too.
\n-Speaking of the Develop a Treatment section, I don't think we've ever agreed on another, better heading for that. I could even be fine with that one; just wanted to get some more ideas for that.
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\nI think that's it. I left the resources kind of open too, but I put placeholders where I thought they might work the best.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"48814877","dateCreated":"1325778960","smartDate":"Jan 5, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"brett.smith","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/brett.smith","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1318860106\/brett.smith-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/ketvidprodmodproj.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/48814877"},"dateDigested":1532128957,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Ideas for Module 3 Text","description":"Copy\/pasted from Module 5 discussion...
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\n"Jeff's comment: "...it involves more educational tasks and activities -- planning, outlining, writing, revising, cooperative, etc. ..." is a very good point. I always teach the VP process by discussing the writing process with students. I think this needs to be mentioned in module 1 under the first bullet below #6. Or maybe it would be better in Module 3 under #6. Wherever that goes, I think it should be referenced in the other. Since it's about content correlations, perhaps the 1st module would be better. Script-writing in Module 3 would simply go into more detail. Am I confusing you, yet?"
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\nFrom Cynthia","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}